Friday, February 17, 2017

Our Garden Tower Comments

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Rotten strawberries,
among dying white flowers

Our garden was perfect,
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Rod Mendieta 05 March 2017

The images of the tower in the middle of a garden and the narrator wasting away like a withering tree are very compelling. I think in the fifth line from the last one you meant waste, not waist.

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