Wednesday, October 16, 2019

Our Gang Comments

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The water is putting on a show of sound
Our boat is rocking back and forth and up and down
The Geese are getting their breakfast off the ground
Seagulls are floating around
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Larry McLamb
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Lawerence Mize, Sr. 05 February 2021

Sounds like you were sitting on your boat and watching the world go by.

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Jazib Kamalvi 26 September 2020

Write comment. Such a nice start, Larry McLamb. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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