Saturday, April 12, 2014

Our Friendship Comments

Rating: 4.2

Our friendship is like a durable tree
tall and broad, that never pines
fluttering with it my sorrows flee
with water of love always shines
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Hira Akhtar
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Chinedu Dike 30 December 2014

A well articulated poem nicely written in poetic diction with lovely rhyme scheme. A friend in need is a friend indeed. A good friend is almost the equal of a good and happy family. I like the articulation of the poem as it captured the essence of true friendship. Anyone who has found a true friend is blessed with a rare gem. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Kudos Hira! Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Piumi Wijenayake 04 August 2014

Its nice work and you did a good job

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Akhtar Jawad 20 April 2014

Good, you have edited and made it a durable. I have also edited and corrected many lines when guided by Bri Edwards. Any way it' sa nice poem.

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Anil Kumar Panda 13 April 2014

True friendship lasts forever.Nice poem.Loved it.Keep inking Hira.

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Usman Arshad 12 April 2014

Friendship is a tree if its leaves is vast and green it gives shadows to more people as compared to those trees which have weak and baseless stem. So always become big tree to give shadow to others

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