Red, white an’ blue
Three golden stars an’ a sun
Symbol of sovereignty
Seal of authority
...
Read full text
hey sir.. your love for your motherland seems to ooze out through this one.! ! hey specially liked this part 'To fight corruption an’ tyranny Locates, defeats terrorism’s nanny At day ends our nation’s free From all crisis’ spree ' nice indeed 10 with love shan
a true beautiful poem my friend and i think that they will use it as a national song..beautiful images, wonderfully said...loved it
A good poem reflecting patriotism and nationalism. A nationalist approach under something that unites people i.e., the flag is mandatory for arousal of faith and descipline in a nation. If in a country people work with such nationalism in the very best interest of their nation, prosperity is certain. Regards Naseer
i think the lady be heard first... Lady Grace (7/13/2009 4: 26: 00 AM) our flag is the symbol of our country..the 'PEARL OF THE ORIENT SEAS, ' THE PHILIPPINES..each colors have their respective meanings..stars are the 3 main islands the rays of the sun represents the places of past wars..PHILIPPINES is a recognized country..large percentage of population are educated..industries are rampants, new methods of livelihood are introduced..exports imports are well trade..government? ..well, others are facing crisis too like ours..when to be free? ...ONLY GOD KNOWS...grace what else can i add!
really a patriotic poem. the lines reverberate in the citizens. your style of repeating first two ines in every para is remarkable. i love this poem. love surya
our flag is the symbol of our country..the 'PEARL OF THE ORIENT SEAS, ' THE PHILIPPINES..each colors have their respective meanings..stars are the 3 main islands the rays of the sun represents the places of past wars..PHILIPPINES is a recognized country..large percentage of population are educated..industries are rampants, new methods of livelihood are introduced..exports imports are well trade..government? ..well, others are facing crisis too like ours..when to be free? ...ONLY GOD KNOWS...grace
Red, white an’ blue Three golden stars an’ a sun Together we endure an’ cry Ready to defend an’ die... country's flag is of supremer respect for any national and to die for honour and to the country is our sacred aim... very good write...10 read mine do we need dictaror? martyres and yes to to
A marvelous tribute to our national flag... awesome rhymes and rhythm, fine diction... meaningful poem in eloquence... Hail to our flag that represents our country, our history This will remind our fellowmen to value our flag and our country...10+++
I like how you use imagery to illustrate your love for your countrymen and the Philippines and also how you are fully committed of serving the Philippines until your last breath, Properity booms as if flower garden booms.