Thursday, June 26, 2014

Our First Kiss Lingers Comments

Rating: 5.0

Our first kiss lingers come rain come shine
It was a soul to soul melody, yours to mine.
Love was soaring, like a seagull above the sea
Our hearts danced in harmony with the melody
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Sophy Iminzah
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Chinedu Dike 09 March 2018

Fine and lofty verse embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing Sophy and do remain enriched.

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Jazib Kamalvi 30 November 2017

Very lovely poem, Sophy. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Sophy Iminzah 30 November 2017

I am glad you enjoyed. I sure will read yours

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Centfie Val Chunge 30 November 2017

I am glad you enjoyed it.I sure will read yours asap

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Centfie Val Chunge 27 June 2014

Thank you for reading and for your nice feedback. Thank you.

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Khairul Ahsan 26 June 2014

A wonderful poem that would strike a cord in many a heart! I've rated it 10/10. I have a poem titled 'French Kiss'. If you have time, you may like to read and say a few words.

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