Monday, June 24, 2013

Our Final Verdict Comments

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It can come calling us any time
Be it rain or shine,
It comes so unexpectedly
That we keep wondering repeatedly,
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Kavya .
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Geetha Jayakumar 12 August 2013

Our Final Verdict...beautiful poem, loved reading each lines...live the life to the fullest with satisfaction...true said.. Good message Kavya.

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Jenie Franksay 25 June 2013

good write. like it. you are talented no doubt.

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Valsa George 25 June 2013

A great poem Kavya! Death, like a thief or an unexpected visitor can come to us anytime without prior intimation or notice! We can only succumb to his summons without resistance! So treat each day as a boon and try to enjoy life without losing in self pity and bitterness or jealousy for others! Enjoyed much!

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Valerie Dohren 24 June 2013

None of us know when our time will come, so good advice to live life to the full while we can. Well said.

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David Wood 24 June 2013

I wrote something similar called Deaths Kiss. A good write never the less.

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