Tuesday, March 17, 2009

Our Final Farewell Comments

Rating: 5.0

You’re tripping, tricking me out,
Making me fall harder each time,
Let me down before I get to high,
Only say hello, never goodbye.
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Emma Jane Pearson
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Manonton Dalan 20 January 2016

doubts that's all it started //////

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Ratnakar Mandlik 20 January 2016

Beautifully penned with intriguing imagery, this poem reflects the efforts to conceal ongoing turmoil of thoughts in the mind of poetess about the future of the love. Thanks for sharing,10 points.

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I really like the imagery of not allowing yourself to get too high. You are certainly protecting yourself from hurt in this write. Great work Emma. Top marks Karin Anderson

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