Friday, January 26, 2018

Our Father And Mother Comments

Rating: 5.0

Husband and wife
Ordained by God
Recognized by law
An intimate and permanent partner
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Isadora Quagmire 01 June 2025

Excellently written! This poem is so lovely and wonderful, you illustrate this glad union superbly! This poem made me think of my own father and mother, thank you so much for sharing this! FULL STARS! ! !

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Nabakishore Dash 02 November 2021

.A good quality sauce written for parents.Excellently described with utmost truth and nice words.

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Nabakishore Dash 02 November 2021

Our father and mother are poles apart

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Varsha M 10 March 2021

A profound piece of write Rose. As i was passing through every line a scene plays of what you want to convey... because our parents made it through all proes

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Rosie Bourget 26 January 2020

Together they help hand in hand to keep the family, raise the children, teach them values and the culture of which they belong and provide the basic needs like food, shelter and clothing. They also give love and promote welfare.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 September 2019

I am reading this caring, loving and beautiful poem, a most beautiful poem created, time and again. I have enjoyed very much. Thank you immensely for sharing. God´s Blessings. Amen.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 June 2019

Such an ardent and sweetest poem sixteen stanzas long, can only be created by a most caring, most loving and devoted daughter, you dear Mrs. Juan-Austin. The marrage of your beloved parents is based upon true love and united by God. Your fascinating words are the proof of your parents'true love for each other. I am truly touched. ToMyPoemList

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 September 2019

error please, must be: in the second line: The marriage of...Thank you.

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Mahtab Bangalee 30 April 2019

superb writings on parents

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Bernard F. Asuncion 18 September 2018

Such an inspiring and heartwarming poem with a touch of humor, love, and harmony....10+++++++++++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 August 2018

I am here in this poem for second time. This poem has a great theme and touching expression that attracts the readers to go through. Love of father and mother each other has been astutely inscribed as..... But no matter How much they antagonized each other Whenever their love is put to a test They love each other to death. Very nice. I may visit again.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 July 2018

Father and mother love each other deeply. They work together and take care of their children perfectly. They are two sides of a coin. They share their grief and feeling. They are like a seesaw.....up and down. An outstanding poem with great write and nice theme. thanks for sharing.10

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Akhtar Jawad 15 May 2018

Our parents Are similar to a seesaw As one of them goes up The other goes down. Very realistic, amazing and outstanding!

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Robert Murray Smith 09 May 2018

A wonderful ode to your parents. Everyone is unique but fortunately accommodation of another occurs. +++10 Robert

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 May 2018

Indeed differences like night and day, I must admit, is the best surface for a happy marriage. I have come to a crystal clear summing up: At the touch of love, we become a poet, no matter the order of love IF there is love. a newest poem is created in an eye wink while winking my eye to the poetess. This is an impressive result of your genuine love to your parents and my zest to read such mesmerizing poetry. Mrs. Juan-Austin. A ctest 10 V

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 September 2019

error again, it must be: A cutest 10 V, in the last line. Thank you.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 February 2018

Wow! Rose you have wonderfully put the earnest love for our parents in general and your parents in particular in an elegant piece of poetry: They were graced by /Two beautiful children/Joyfully and wonderfully made/Whose frames were framed after them....Great!

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Your amazing comments, Dr. Dillip motivate minds to formulate more ideas. Thank you so much.

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Yiyan Han 29 January 2018

After your gran's childhood Now devote to your lovely parents Well penned - yes opposite attracts.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 February 2018

Thank YiYan for your great comment.Your visit is much appreciated.

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 January 2018

Different taste buds! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 February 2018

Thank you Edward for commenting. Your visit is much.appreciated

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