Monday, October 17, 2011

Our Family, My Family Comments

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Our family, My family, so broken and divided are we
So caught up with anger amongts ourselves, so much we cannot see
So focused on bitter disputes and drawn out battle lines
Still trying to achieve victory against these unbreakable vines
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Patrick Villareal
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Marcus Mckinley 18 October 2011

nicely done. i like the reality of your poem. it fits in most peoples family situations. just remember it only takes one to gather the pieces and it takes all to put them together.

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