Our Eyes Comments

yes when the eyes start to converse...a music of love we start hearing from within...an expressive poem

Carol, our eyes are indeed the mirrors of our souls... captured beautifully by your pen... Brilliant Alf

wow! ! ! its beautiful. Your poem is small but very true. I truly believe that eyes --the connector-- to that gate of love. A+ and 10+ regards anjali

through music, love can be tasted and sensed. if we are in love, our world become music hall. and our hearts are the musicians. very expressive in simple way! keep writing!

hi sweety, i love ur poem it is very nice.your father must be proud of u.u have a real talent.

Beautiful thought... I don't care if all alphabets are in capitals... As long as I can grasp the core of this poem, I don't mind breaking any rules... As I believe that there are no rules in poetry... Flow is wonderful... It connects our true inner self to our so called fake conscious... and at same time this bond spreads like an infectious disease... I wish there would be a Pandemic of such infectious connectivity through human souls, and poets like you can help us revitalize this connectivity in this world of dying humanity... Regards, Kamran

You have a romantic heart, and it flows from your pen to write words that entice us all. Very well done; -)

It is nice poem with a beautiful dimension. I love it and added my 10. However, all capitals are a bit......

nice! keep writing! could you read my poems too? thank you.

'We are connected...bonded for all time'..... Excellent passage... Please read 'Ecstasy.'