Wednesday, July 1, 2009

Our Existence Is But A Breath Comments

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My shadow rushes aimlessly contending with all,
the ending vague, as a tree engaged in its fall.

In my rebellious silence I cry, rescue the only prayer,
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Chanda Mwenechanya 02 May 2011

our existence is but breath, ..being is but dry molecules of dust particles hitting our nostrils, being is but breath! Our existence not in the mouth or nose but in a going and a returning..nice poem and thought brilliant.

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Jasmin Bell 01 July 2009

great poem read my poems id like your opinion

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Nooruddeen Mm 01 July 2009

Joey Beautiful Keep it up Nooruddeen

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Mubeen Sadhika 01 July 2009

A nice poem. Pl read my poems and send your comments.

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