Thursday, February 15, 2007

Our Ending Comments

Rating: 5.0

The pain I'm feeling is so real
Why can't you understand the pain I feel
The pain is not in my head as you think
I wish I could have just one stiff drink
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Bonnie B Long
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Geoff Warden 27 February 2007

Very nicly put, flow gets just a tad stiky, but all in all a grand write

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