Monday, February 23, 2015

Our Earthly Mother Comments

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Our earthly mother,
Who gives us life;
Our earthly mother,
Heart filled with strife,
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Juwon Daniel
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Dannybee Juwon 12 May 2015

Our earthly mother, Who gives us life; Our earthly mother, Heart filled with strife, We love her not, Though love we should; Her death we plot, For life's 'own good'; Good diction and rhyme, iT a betrayal sign

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Artistry The Sound 23 February 2015

Mother earth is being killed by the hands of her children, but those same hands can save her as well. Good poem, good rhythm and poetic diction.

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Artistry The Sound 23 February 2015

Mother earth is being killed by the hands of her children, but those same hands can save her as well. Good poem, good rhythm and poetic diction.

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Artistry The Sound 23 February 2015

Mother earth is being killed by the hands of her children, but those same hands can save her as well. Good poem, good rhythm and poetic diction.

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