Thursday, March 26, 2015

Our Dream On Wheels Comments

Rating: 5.0

Our family caravan that held all our dreams,
To discover our birth land,
We were like a travelling soul band,
As we observed mountain views,
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Hazel Durham
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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 October 2018

Revisiting such a lovely poem we feel glad. They are sitting on nature's humble throne and love is travelling with life and vision...10

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Lyn Paul 05 April 2015

How wonderful the way you have shared these positive family memories with us all.

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Dinesan Madathil 01 April 2015

A poem vivid in cluster of episodes narrated and reverberating a poetic effort all throughout to make it one with distinct charm. A fine poem, Hazel and I give 10 for it. I am sorry for being away from the PH for almost 2 months. Shall be reading further...

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Kelly Kurt 31 March 2015

A wonderful poem, Hazel, Thanks for sharing. Peace.

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Rajesh Thankappan 29 March 2015

A man may rejoice about his memories or feel deflated about it. So it is not better that we cling on to the the former though the latter may try to punch holes into it? A lovely poem that traversed though beautiful landscape of Ireland and through the inner tracks of life.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 March 2015

Very nice poem. Aptly and nicely composed. I like this poem. Best word choice. Many thanks. ....10

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Stephen Katona 27 March 2015

If we all remembered happy times such as these we would 'never feel alone'. A beautiful reminder to hold onto memories. It is all too easy to let memories fade. Time to get some old photos out and be inspired to make some new ones...

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Jak Black 27 March 2015

A lovely poem, Hazel. Brings back fond memories of my travels through Ireland. Your well chosen words depict an image of a slower paced more relaxing way of life.

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Valsa George 27 March 2015

We had the pick Of scenery that rolled out before us, Like a wild beast never captured, it just ran free, Through our elated thoughts, ....... Lovely lines in a lovely poem! With you I too was travelling on wheels past mystical fields, farm houses and unwinding stretch of scenery!

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Akhtar Jawad 26 March 2015

Feelings and sentiments of a patriotic poetess appeared in the lovely dance of words. How nicely she describes her love for her beloved motherland. An enchanting poem.............10

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