Tuesday, April 19, 2016

Our Desirable Night In June Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'll bring the matches,
You ignite the fire,
Burn the biggest branches,
As our bodies start to perspire.
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Edward Kofi Louis 24 April 2016

Our romance will live on! Nice piece of work.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 21 April 2016

Beautiful description of desire... I loved this stanza most. I'll turn off the lights, While you emit the moon, And feel our bodies collide, This desirable night in June. Thanks dear for it.

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Ella Rose 21 April 2016

many thanks Subhas for your kind words... :) ~ellarose~

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Kim Barney 21 April 2016

Very passionate. Well written. Welcome to Poem Hunter. I learned about you from a comment you left on a Wes Vogler poem.

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Ella Rose 21 April 2016

awww. thank you Kim very much for your kind feedback. I am glad to be here and hope to be connected to a wonderful fellowship of gifted poets :) ~ellarose~

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Dev Anand 19 April 2016

Our romance will live on, devotion, For there are no words to convey, The depth of our intense emotions, The passion we vividly portray. a wonderful passionate poem. love it very much.

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Ella Rose 19 April 2016

many thanks Dev..be blessed -EllaRose

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