You stayed with me as a fond memory.
The green feathers and your chattering.
I know you were angry when we pulled your tail
and tormented you inside the cage.
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A lovely poem dear poetess. I like the delicacy of poetic expression. Top score and to my favourite! !
Bharati ma'am you reminded me of my friend's experience. She also had a parrot a family member but one day it was gone and couldn't be traced back. Beautiful.
Touching and amusing poem, superbly written dear Poetess! 5 Stars full on Top. I have enjoyed very much.
This is a very sensitive poem that the near and dear lovely parrot flew away and didn't return back for which whole family members are sheding tears. I wrote..... Perhaps you did not know How to return Perhaps you did not know And would never know We were crying Mother and we Waiting. This beautiful poem has value more that I made second visit. Thanks again.
Thank you so much Poet Sri Kumaramani Mahakul for your revisit to this poem.I am so glad to know that you like the poem.
As is customary now, I say I was brought here by Bri's Showcase. God! Wonderful and sad poem. Almost shed a tear, and that's no small accomplishment for any poem, given that I can be accurately called 'borderline cynic'!
Thanks a lot Rod Mendieta for reading and commenting on my poem.It is so nice to know that this poem has touched you.
This is the world of cage. everyone restricted their own cage (own set of fundamentals)
Oh, but this lovely poem brought back memories of our parakeet. It was my pet and my enchantment with it lasted until I got my first horse and then it was bye bye birdie and hello world of the horse! Luckily Mom enjoyed Petey and he loved her back with all his birdy affection. God has created an abundance of animals with whom we can share our lives... thank you for sharing your experiences with your family's parrot. They certainly become part of the family story, don't they?
Very Nice Poem of Delicate feelings about a Pet.. that is poisoned in a Cage.. yet with lines full of Love with deep feeling understanding the Parrot's mind.! ! Thank you for sharing! ! 10+++
A very tender poem. Even the reader me is missing that lovely parrot. Let me join your search. (10)
Very exciting but more touching....a poem to cherish.....thanks for sharing this work here Bharati
What an amazing narrative about a caged pet parrot- adored by all in the family in the first part and missed by all when it flies away. Very emotional. But the following expression is simply the winner- You did not come back / Perhaps you did not know / How to return
Bitter-sweet memories recalled in fondness. Emotional attachment with a pet is natural n beautiful. A heart-touching write. I also had kittens as pets. Their memory stays with me to this day. A lovely trip down the memory lane. An evocative piece.10
beautiful, emotions filled in the lines beautifully. bird flew away and didn't know how to return
The cage was shut from outside. But you could easily open it from inside and enjoy the pleasure of freedom at your own will... I am so happy that the bird could handle the cage from inside to get freedom. Once the bird got out but didn't return and it was great grief for the poetess's family... heart touching depiction. Many thanks dear Bharati for posting such a lovely poem...10
A wonderful poem.... brilliantly expressed