Wednesday, December 2, 2015

Our Dad Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your cornflower blue eyes danced to your own tune,
With your warmth and kindness that was like a beautiful cocoon,
Your beaming smile like the welcoming glow of the eternal moon,
Our dad had gifted hands that encouraged flowers too bloom,
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Hazel Durham
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Dimitrios Galanis 31 January 2016

A great memorandum of grace worthly owed.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 December 2015

Your cornflower blue eyes danced to your own tune, You mesmerized people with your natural wit, Like a candle that is lovingly lit, Very beautiful expression of this poem not only amazes mind but also fills life in emotion and hopes. Fantastic sharing done really.10

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Paul Warren 09 December 2015

Our fathers are a shining light to our childhood and fond memories to look back on. I loved your ode to your father. Thankyou

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Sayeed Abubakar 04 December 2015

It was the same when you were just a boy you were loved by all, As the years passed the leaves began to fall, Great piece. Your poem is always cool, calm but full of lovely passion. Your love to your dad shows that you are a grateful offspring of him.

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Valsa George 03 December 2015

Because you cared so much with your great love, Even after the leaves fall, you showed us how to stand tall, ........... A loving tribute to your great Dad! With a heart overflowing with sweet memories, a dear daughter recounts the sentiments of affection for a father who has departed to his Heavenly abode! Yes, when we look back, we understand how bright the trail of light our parents have left behind. They continue to inspire and guide us. The poem is outstanding in its warmth of feeling!

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Jak Black 03 December 2015

A lovely sentiment expressed here. Your dad would be exremely proud to know that he is remembered in such a positive and loving way., proof that his life was worthwhile.

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M Asim Nehal 03 December 2015

A wonderful tribute by a loving daughter to her AWESOME Dad, May his soul RIP......He is still alive in your heart and in your lovely poem, Thanks for sharing such a soulful poem Madam Hazel..100 on 10.

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Dan Reynolds 03 December 2015

You have summed up his character for us all to share.

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Akhtar Jawad 03 December 2015

Because you cared so much with your great love, Even after the leaves fall, you showed us how to stand tall, And to always reach for the twinkling stars above, That hold the eternal light of your love. A nice gratitude to a great father.

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