Wednesday, August 10, 2011

Our Customer Jack Comments

Rating: ★4.0

Seated on the bar stool
Our Customer Jack
In one hand Theakstons bitter
The other a cigarette pack
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Donna Caldwell
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Bri Edwards 11 June 2013

i like a poem with a comprehensible and interesting story and rhyming. you did it right! (not that there aren't other acceptable ways!) and the rhythm works just fine for me as well. jack not only adds character to the bar. he IS a character. thanks for sharing.

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Sharad Juneja 20 April 2012

I loved every word of it... its a class

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Donna Caldwell

Donna Caldwell

Manchester
Donna Caldwell
Donna Caldwell
Manchester
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