Our Craft (Haiku) Comments

neat figures of speech; D well depicted.

this is not bad piece nicely written

Oh. I need to research this form then... I can always edit this one if my sleepy ideas decide to return. The one I was writing in my head when I was too sleepy to move was rhyming and everything, not originally destined to be a haiku. But sadly it passed away: '0(

I keep a notepad by my bedside and often jot ideas down, but sometimes sleep comes first and they are forgotten in the morning. Love this little write, great ideation..