! ! Our Comet Wise Comments

an exciting trip to the infinites vast world, reminding us that we are all one, as creation of god, though we may look externally different, we are the same under the garb of clothes! dear bob, you think so beautifully! thanks, for sharing this.

Bob im loving your work, greatness in your free formed lines gives this an excellent edge to your creative penning..

Well written poem with good expressions. Enjoyed the peregrination.

Enjoyed the read Bob You write in free form with seeming ease and get your message across with clarity whilst I stick with the discipline of set forms

a cosmic metaphor for the inner bliss that all us want to fill in our inner cloister porfound layers of thought unfolding through your sunlit verses.

This is a warm and thoughtful poem about our universe. It was like traveling the planets - thanks for the exciting trip, Bob! A '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

A poem that is almost spiritual in it's intensity. A poem that shows the wonder of being and existing in this universe. Lovely!

You have excelled with this marvellous piece Bob, the wisdom of a Welshman, honest and true, 10 Lynda xx

Stunning, fanatstic read Bob, the wisdom in this piece is mind shattering. Well done.

Comet/wise metaphor is simply great; a great thought. All that followed was wisdom of an honest thinker.....faascinating piece indeed.............10

Your comet is the perfect metaphor for understanding the truth of spiritual bliss. The shining head, the long fiery tale and expansive nature of such a magnificent heavenly body uplifts and inspires the reader.. In particular I loved the line: 'Can we solve Rubik Heavens secret code, for happiness and bliss? ' Oh that you words could be written in huge letters across the sky! Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

A very enlightening, uplifting & enjoyable read Bob 10/10

A very wonderful poem to make the world a better place to live in which we all are striving.

The very sun that enables us to see objects also prevents us from seeing beyond it...we must be able to see what is 'beyond behind this light'...there lies the enlightenment to comprehend...our 'soul searching comet like journeys' towards this goal should continue unabatedly...very insightful write, Bob 10

Our comet streaks before us we follow it's fiery trail it leads us through the heavens, searching for the holy grail our destiny unknown as as we plough on through the stars souring through the cosmos, way past Jupiter and mars loved this poem Bob

'the whispered hush, the noiseless flow......' Great lines, Bob, and another superb poem. Magical....... Love, Fran xxx

Bob this must be one of your very best - I love it and have put it with my favourites. Cosmic sprinkling of knowledge - leaving truth in it's tail - a welcome Comet indeed.10++++ for it's flow, it's calming sound when read aloud - it's message of enlightened love. Lovely Bob. - - - from Fay.

thoughtful composition indeed! ..........10