Tuesday, January 27, 2009

Our Child Comments

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this is our child.
not just yours or mine
but everyones, that are born in our time.
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 October 2009

if as a child you was abused, neglected, and not loved then it's time for you to change your life around and not let these children die on the ground. stand up and fight, and take pride in what you do. the child you save, could have been you......right cause to beserved for self if undergoone ever for suchabuse..it is duty to be onforfront to save one atleast in life time...lovley poemand honest desire.....10 read mine smiley......kids......school

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Vaibhav Pandey 30 January 2009

another brilliant write.....poems like this can bring out change in mindset that is needed.

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I love my child this is a true poem at heart.. Great work Krista

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bro. I second my friend linda on this. Gr8t piece. The kids do and say to plz us, at least initially. Love and cherish them! ! ! Family! ! ! God meant for families

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Linda Winchell 28 January 2009

Very true words and all beautifully placed. God Bless the children! Ten!

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