Our Brush With Death! Comments

this had a sureal/whimsical feel to me, not sure if I've ever seen 'flipbooks' in a poem before. -chuck

devouring. engrossing. completely absorbing. you know how to provoke a flow- can't wait to see what you do with it, Michael. furthermore, i respect your abolishment of ideals in your writing. slant towards the finite. the realistic. tragic. and penetrable mortality. care, sjg