Buddha, you are right, when you were confused,
Diseases and Old age are not fun to delight,
To the ones who have exposed their nerves,
to all worldly pleasures to seek and experiment,
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I loved your poem, I had written a similar poem Boddhisattva in my student days, which had won many awards. you may like to see some of my poems here.
A lovely poem. We all have to age but the trick is not to worry about aging. What will be will be. A good write