Thursday, June 28, 2018

Our Bodies Are Not Guaranteed Comments

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Our bodies are not guaranteed,
We cannot say when and where
The souls inside our bodies
Will leave the perishable abodes.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Valsa George 30 June 2018

Uncertainty prevails in life. No one can predict accurately what is going to happen in future! We are not guaranteed of a tomorrow. So don't postpone anything for tomorrow. Procrastination is the curse of modern man! We should do what needs to be done today! A great write containing golden rules for life!

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Robert Murray Smith 30 June 2018

A truly well written poem. Impressive.++10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 June 2018

A great poem.Very moving lines. An apt title that impels a reader to go through with this profound piece of work. Well crafted write.10+++++++

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Kelly Kurt 29 June 2018

Having no empirical evidence of the supernatural, I just appreciate every moment. Sharing with others gives me respite.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 29 June 2018

Due to his Grace we see ever The light of hope and progress, We must share our anxieties with him. Then we will get peace, love and bliss. JUST THE RIGHT WORDS ONE NEED TO READ AND OR HEAR SIR COMING FROM YOU SO ILASO SAY MEDITATE NOW TOMORROW MAY BE TOO LATE SAYS ME POET

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Akhtar Jawad 29 June 2018

Yes, the thread of breaths may be broken at any time after that like a threadless kite we have to fall somewhere.

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Rini Shibu 29 June 2018

It's never too late to complete the task...good message and beautifully penned

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Mahtab Bangalee 29 June 2018

great faith No hindrance, no fear, no stricture He is with us, our Supreme Soul-God,

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 June 2018

Our bodies aren't guaranteed We can't say when and where The souls inside our bodies Will leave the perishable bodies.....Established reality! A beautiful poem is shared....10

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Muzahidul Reza 28 June 2018

Beings' body and themselves have no guarantee, thanks for sharing the poem with us

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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