Our Birth Never Defines Us Comments

" Birth never defines us." A great and moving line from a beautiful poem. Revisiting this marvelous write imbued with a meaningful message.

Finest of wisdom poured in poetic form. We can learn so much from Nature. Thank you for sharing Bipasha, and thanks again for reading my poem Grandma’s advice and for your comment.

A beautiful thought. Thanks for sharing

Well said. Birth does not and should not define us. The poem carries a profound message for those with obscurantist mentality. Thanks for this meaningful poem. I quote: What we make out of ourselves is vital. Only that aspect is important and crucial.

A profound and thought provoking write and that too with rhythm and rhyme. Thanks for sharing.

Profound and inspiring poem, Loved it.10

What we make out of ourselves is vital! A cute poem dear Bipasha! I greatly admire your theme selection and style of penning! (10)

What we make out of ourselves is vital- very good poem short but very impressive /with thanks 10

Excellent....you always think wide and broad and high and deep to present your thoughts just in short poems and that is what I like the most in you..I always like short poems...thank you Bipasha for this great work

Hi Bipasha, Very true, indeed!

A powerful succinct write. The last stanza says it all. Yes, birth never defines us. We make our own destiny with the.help of God Almighty.A great piece.10

]]Even if lotus shares a bond With muddy and murky pond[[ What can I say? Awesome!

well said, in few words. Welcome to PoemHunter! bri ;)

wow, bipasha! i'm reading your poems, and this one packs a punch for me. the image in the first stanza is great and sets up your assertion well. and the rhymes in this one flow naturally, seem unforced. yay! -glen

Many great personalities prove the fact you have chosen in your poem Nice poem

Witty reflection on life and power of positive thinking, nicely brought forth in beautiful rhyme scheme with conviction. An insightful motivational poem. Thanks for sharing Bipasha and stay enriched.

Yeah true Everyman has a chance to prove oneself. Good