Our Beautiful Children…. Comments

one of the best poems i have read so far.poem shows your genuine concern for the children of the world.whereever they may be they need love and guidance, to become true citizens of the world.great write......10+++ ritty

like i said its ood. :)

it's the beautiful earth's future that's dying, isn't it? i think it's 'an elegy to beslan' in which i expressed a similar concern...all humans have similar concerns. wonder where lies the gap between concern and action!

All children are beautiful irrespective of their race and color. And let the children play together under the heavenly tent. Best Wishes Naseer

indeed H_L Let the colorful doves caress the blue firmament And let the children play together under the heavenly tent. thats Gods way...thats how HE would want it very nice lines cheers

With 9 billion people there is much suffering

Beautiful children are suffering everywhere. black or brown white or bright. Some have no food others are love starved. CP

Read yah, loud and clear. What else can I say, it's beautiful, lovely, gorgeous, fantastic, etc... how could you write that way...very creative, profoundly written, touch my heart, it even bleeds me furiously. Oh my this is wonderful, wish I could also write like this. Very talented indeed. Over all impression - I've already given all the superlatives that I could think of. Mind you, I love children too, no race stratification. Thanks...

it was beautifully writen. and it is all so true in this realm we call home. very nice.

The foolishness of human being one day will give place for reason. On this day everybody will be dealt as f God's children.

that's an issue that calls for concern on what is happening to children on a global scale. a good one i say. thank you.

Beautiful thoughts but who shall bell the cat? It's really terrible to see all these ugly things taking place in the world but trust me, the world is out of human hands. Why anyone should stop these killings, when no material gains can be made? Though I call it a brave attempt to plead for the children of the world, regardless of their colors, races or creed. Regards

a very good poem...differences are causing wars..affecting our children

yes why we bring childern to tis world then we kill them, wat ever the color of the skin they all lovers of the God, when we will care, when we will lisene, when when. Let the rainbow display the colors of heaven. Let’s fill up the air with love(i love tis experssion, sad but well write poem)

I very much appreciate the work for its very loafty theme. Even though man is against war, he has subconsciously accepted it. Why? Because he thinks that it is a defensive mechanism in this material world. He forgets that his defensive mechanism can be viewed as an offence by the world. Bible hasn't taught us this line of action. Then, why are we after it? If we can't accept others as our brothers and sisters, where is the real salvation? Dickens had cried for the upliftment of children but who has really paid attention him? Only through unconditional love can we build a bright and prosperous world. Weapons will only fetch more weapons. A pat will go a long way.

Well said, we live in a world full of greed which is using up its resources fast, and to top it all not sharing it with those that need.

profound protest and well done, I identify with the sentiments best Wishes Shimon

The Innocent's, caught in struggles of power and greed, not only criminal in our World, but Morally criminal for Man to act in such a way. Heartbreaking to see and praying it will stop. God Bless You for the words you wrote.

'We forgot that we were once beautiful children. When will this senseless carnage end? We should love them and protect them. We should feed them and help them. Yes very true we often forget that we were once beautiful children. Good write! ! ! ! ! Keep sharing with us. ++10 X Anju

This poem brought tears to my eyes...we must save all the world's children. Poignantly beautiful poem. Your poem reminds me of a childhood church song that I took to heart at a very young age. 'Jesus love the little children...all the children of the world'. I do not consider myself to be religious since I don't follow any one particular religion, but I am very spiritual and I believe the best way to honor God is to honor his children...All of them. I love your message and I hope many hear it.