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I loved this poem, with its powerful message to never give up what you believe in that is what true love means. Excellent!

I like this one... True love shall conquer all... When you write from the heart, it is never wrong... Well done...

Great inspirational write! Enjoyed the metered cadence as well as the message.

Wow, that's a really great poem. I love your write[3

tiffany this is such a wonderful work from you it will really help the couple to have a sustainable marriage.

i think it should be called No matter what lol it was a good write keep it up

hi that was a cool poem how did u come up with it

Dear Rose, Thanks for sharing it. And please keep writing.

This is a poem for a romatic, and even if your far from it you are still touched by the words. Nice job!

Keep up the great work! ! :) It is wonderful!

I really did like this one! Keep on writing!

As an engrained cynic who’s a closeted romantic I love the fervor that is found in every line, and your belief in the supremacy of love. A fabulous piece.

Rose dear, am in love with you for this one. Thanks for sharing it. And please keep writing. It reminds me of my series of poem 'My Woman I to X'

I like your pattern of 2/1 2/1... two lines No matter... one line Remember... and that repeated 4 times - before you even feel the emotion in this poem it looks like a poem. I like the poem's simplicity too. The lines are a little uneven - the line with grudge in it is longer than the rest, and I'm not sure about it's you I endear. But these are small bones to pick. Your poem does to me what a poem should do, it connects with me. I like it. Thank you.

very hopeful at thought! ! sometimes i wonder how we humans are so hopeful at thought? ? suppose to be like our instinct but c'ldnot even sigh its attitude at strict confession..........depicts like the patience we take to look into the things happened varies in all ways.....keep going! !