Our 25th Valentines Comments

I like the wider context included in this deeply felt love poem. Well written. Paul.

Lovely poem Marvin, I love to hear of love that lasts, certainly cause for celebration. Regards ~ Res

The speaker addresses his lady in the language of love, their relationship (carpe diem) , in essence, defies death by a firm belief in living in the present.

Very artistic Marvin, i enjoyed reading this! beau

so beautiful, thanks for sharing

quite amazing, both when walk hand in hand across the journey of life.wish all the best

A wonderful write, and i know you two will cling to each other for better or for worse.