Saturday, April 18, 2015

Ouch Comments

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It was a marriage ceremony,
A high heel injured his foot,
He said,
Ouch!
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Akhtar Jawad
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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 April 2015

Nicelyenvisioned, interesting composition. Many thanks.

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Khalida Bano Ali 18 April 2015

A bitter truth.................................................10

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Valsa George 18 April 2015

Double standards.........! ! Most of us are like this only! Interesting write!

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