Tuesday, January 24, 2006

Otter's Cry Comments

Rating: 5.0

Cocooned in inky blackness
frost biting the brittle shell of the boat

my mind fingers its way through the sleeping stillness
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Anthony Dalby
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Annette Lohan 31 January 2006

I agree with Wendy. I particularly like the line ' tail round haunch round claw round tooth round dream'.

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