Sunday, August 11, 2019

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Watching the sun in pink showers,
Your visits to the lonely beaches,
Looking at, with sighs, silent flowers,
In a garden on the corner benches,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 12 August 2019

I went to the new library looking for my old friends no one could tell me how their lives did end now read my poem for WORLDS POETS U ASKED SIR JA No one could tell me about their ends so I also composed a poem for poets of worlds not PH But u r incl Sir JA ji

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 August 2019

What a wonderful story. And the great Poet narrated it so beautifully. Made me remember some wonderful memories in the library and I smiled while reminiscing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 August 2019

You have well executed the love story of one of your friends who fell in love with a class mate who are now husband and wife. Beautiful poem.

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Jane Campion 11 August 2019

I was going to say great imaginings. Now I know it is all true.

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