Monday, June 29, 2009

Other Half Comments

Rating: 5.0

Blue stretched wide as dawn rises,
labored breath meets another day
without the other. Blood seeps through
open wounds, lifeless eyes open but lost.
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Pam Thomas
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David Harris 11 October 2009

Pam, this is a sad and heartfelt poem of grief. Beautifully written. Top marks and thanks for sharing it with us. Hugs David

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