Tuesday, June 23, 2020

Ostrich Comments

Rating: 5.0

A bird of power
The largest living avian
Unable to fly.
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Nabakishore Dash 21 May 2023

With a ball-like egg.perhaps eggs takeaway all energy, and the ostrich cannot fly

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Bri Edwards 16 December 2020

BUT....don't get into a running race with one, or into a kickboxing match! ! ! bri ;) p.s. and there are flying mammals: bats and " flying squirrels"

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 26 October 2020

A marvelous poem, filled with irony. Very much enjoyed.

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Truly said. Might and power does'nt matter. Its God who makes decisions....10

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Kevin Patrick 29 August 2020

A bird of substance both literally and metaphorically, a captivating haiku, very illuminating.

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Luo Zhihai 28 August 2020

A bird of power The largest living avian Unable to fly. This is a good philosophical poem!

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Yes what a tragedy that it can not fly Having wings in the sky, it can be compared with human beings that those are robust can not fight and move a thing even....very well said...10

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Shaun Cronick 04 July 2020

A bird of power indeed to feature in your short but ever so sweet neat poem. 10++ and thank you Rose Marie.

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 June 2020

Powerful to stay on the ground! ! Unable to fly. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Anjandev Roy 27 June 2020

An excellent piece.......thanks for sharing.....anjandev roy.

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Kostas Lagos 25 June 2020

A strange world depicted with the image of the ostrich... Wonderful!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 24 June 2020

This is simply amazing and wonderful.....10+++

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Sandra Feldman 23 June 2020

Reminds me of us, always unable to fly above our faults and failures, Always repeating the same mistakes, falling into the same traps. Poem short on words but long on thoughts. Very originally and impeccably done.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 June 2020

An exact and accurate observation of ostrich! A thoughtful three-liner! Full marks

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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