Friday, March 18, 2016

Osprey Comments

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Morning sky,
bright sun,
fish eagle
of the marsh
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Barry Middleton
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Pamela Sinicrope 29 July 2016

This is a beautiful tribute to special bird. I love the line, Silver prey hangs from talon strength. And yes, 'an intimation that worship need only the sky.' You've done a nice job of keeping the words to a minimum. It provides a certain level of flow to the writing, like flying. Your regal, powerful, and beautiful images give the reader a sense of the bird Thanks for sharing!

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Barry Middleton 30 July 2016

Thanks Pamela. The image is my own for a change, my favorite osprey in a dead tree at my condo. I saw him yesterday again with a fish in his grasp headed for a different tree.

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