Thursday, December 31, 2015

Osmanthus Comments

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The window opened to the bright moon
Sweet scented osmanthus nodded to the wind
The wind outside curiously asked -
Why the osmanthus flowered in winter
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Cigeng Zhang
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Edward Kofi Louis 21 June 2016

The deep scent of nature! Nice piece of work.

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Daniel Brick 14 January 2016

This is a lovely poem in part because Osmanthus is a lovely flower which is acting in a lovely manner. Loveliness in both appearance and behavior - that SHOULD be true of human beings too. I like the shyness of osmanthus, but also its boldness in sharing immediately its scent. Your poem is also a celebration of non-verbal communication. Osmanthus communicates via its fragrance which the wind will carry to sweeten the rest of the world.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 December 2015

Sweet scented osmanthus nodded to the wind...Very amazing poem shared definitely. Interesting and wise sharing.10

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