Wednesday, April 30, 2014

Orthocentre Of My Thoughts Comments

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Those silent morning hills beside your
sweet smile
those amazing moment that makes me
think for a while
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Vishal Sharma
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Vishal Sharma 12 October 2015

i still think its my best verse till date

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Anubhav Gupta 11 May 2014

Verses are routes, lovely destination is your heart touched me keep going bro. god bless

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Guru Dev 11 May 2014

a decent read.3rd stanza was my fav, but yeah, roaming in darkness, desolation.. attempts at self amending. i wrestled with the last stanza a bit, but overall, nice inna reflective kinda way

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Gajanan Mishra 30 April 2014

very very beautiful, I like it, thanks.

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