Thursday, April 5, 2007

Orpheus Magic Poetic Music Comments

Rating: 5.0

Orphus 'twas playing
His most magical tune
While Greek soldiers
Fought under blue moon
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Theodora (Theo) Onken
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Theodora Onken 04 September 2007

Elysabeth, THANK YOU! God Bless, Theo

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Elysabeth Faslund 19 July 2007

If good ole Orpheus won't give you an Honorable Mention...I'll give you first place. How this work turns and turns again(T.S.) . Between the lines, and how good they are, and meanings, you've taken Greek Tradgedy and turned it to poetry...without a muse to interfere! You had doubts you could write poetry? Maybe before you were born! Great and good! xxElysabeth

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David Harris 12 April 2007

Theodora, this was a magnificent poem of ancient Greece. I've always had a fond liking to the legends of Greece. This to my mind is a great piece. Top Marks from me. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David.

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