Orpheus Comments

'Moon, with hope searches the suns'. Good imagery. I think this about someone having burning desire for love of another. Great write!

Breeze plays rough to hide harp of Orpheus. Oscar appears to hunt attention. And melancholy really pushing to close the window. Will try to read next time. Thanks.

Nice work with the muse of your sweet mind. Thanks for sharing.

Tsira This looks translated. Is English a second language? I love the images but I don't see all of the intent the way that it flows. a poet friend RH Peat

Wonderful poem on Orpheus.

A great composition Tsira. Moon searches sun, as Orpheus Eurydice… Orpheus of cowardice for not being prepared to die for Eurydice… 10+++ with joy.

Breezes expect now our moon......... Moon searching with hope excellent imagery...........enjoyed reading

Poor Orpheus in his darkness, like the moon searching the sun for the light of his lost love. Beautifully written.

Music like that of angels can be heard whilst reading this wonderful piece 10+ as always my sweet

That to tell him evening gossips ---- Crispy tells.....Euridice will be jaleous

On the heart plays with melancholy As on the harp Orpheus... wowwwwwwwww heart plays---on the harp of orpheus brilliant --10 anjali

without the sun, the moon is invisible, without love just melancholy fills the air...deep thought, beautiful, thanks for sharing 10

excellent I have just been to the opera to Orpheus and Eurodice and I am trying to write a poem about Elektra So in your honour I will dedicate the poem when completed but for now the opening a To the alter of death you would not offend the Thunderer RAGE-ATHENA, SING THE RAGE OF ELEKTRA DAUGHTER OF CURSED ARGAMEMNON RAPIST MURDERER AND THE Sacker of cities RAGE HESTIA AGAINST THE MURDEROUS HOUSE OF ATREUS DAMMED THRICE BY ARTEMIS, APPOLLO AND FINALLY BY THE IMMORTAL ZEUS HIMSELF BEGIN MUSE WITH THE SLAYING OF ARTIMISES FAVORITE STAG AND THE PRICE PAID BY IPHEGENIA FOR HER FATHERS ARROGANCE Why! ! Argamemnon did you slay the stag of Artimis Did phoebus Appollo take awy your sight Fool amongst men Who when dependent on the will of the gods Would deprive Artimis of the Golden Deer Whom in her rage deprived you of whom you desired most The beautiful Ipheginea snatched from the sacrificial alter By Diana and transported to Naxos Breaker of Oaths did you not think that by luring the fair brested Iphigania with the false promise of marriage to the Demi God Achillies Would go unpunished? lol jim s its all Ive done still in draft form

So sweet the sound of your words Tsira. Best wishes, Andrew x

Gentle and sweet words Tsira...lovely write thank you...10++

Another melodious write from you Tsira, lovely words thanks, 10 Lynda xx

Going back in time as greek goddess i guess, made my mind in world history...nice poetic verses here Tsira...10+++

Continuous heavenly exchange Tsira - -and well worded - - it has my 10 - best wishes from Fay....xx