Saturday, May 4, 2013

Orphans Of Some Eternal Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

When lightning lights up the sky,

All the babes in the bone-yard cry;
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Patti Masterman
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David Wood 14 May 2013

I can feel the lightning strike. You paint a clear picture with words.

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David Wood 05 May 2013

You poem has a lovely use of words. Words are all we poets have and yours are good. Orphans of some eternal night - very powerful. Thanks for sharing.10/10

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