Orphanage Comments

I think I could get to read a poem after a long time that touched me so deeply! Pretensions is the major characteristic of today's society.Let me quote from this fine poem- - And as I looked around I saw only orphans abound Orphaned of parentage Orphaned of virtues Orphaned of values And orphaned at last of God By whom all of them swore

Sir, In a society where materialism reigns, the sacred memories of Bapu are reined in and money rules the day. FANTASTIC TRIBUTE to the great man who founded a nation out of extreme chaos.10

You took us to an never-ending exquisite ride to the life of the Mahatma. I like the way you write, subtle, simple and calm like the flow of a distant river. A fantastic write.

In a world where everyone thinks only of mercenary gains, what importance does an orphanage have? If shopping complexes are built, that will fetch money! If places of worship are set up, you can win the support of some people and you will be deemed very religious! Besides they are a source of revenue! In our society there is no dearth for places of worship of all religions! But I wonder if God can remain in them, where love and compassion for fellow beings are absent! The river gone dry in the poem, I feel is symbolic of the barren hearts devoid of the well springs of compassion and love! As ever, a great write!

Selfishness, cruelty and vandalism have surfaced so rampant, To think good, to do good is now, a distant proposition. Evils have overpowered all the virtues....... Thanks for sharing this eye opener.

Bapu once sat Right under that mango tree Looking at the children play With a toothless smile This is no orphanage The kids have the nation’s parentage A poem written in a lovable style for kids

We all should remember that service to man is the only service to God. We can render service to God in no other way since everything originates from God and He does not need anything from us. Still I would not discourage prayer and puja if it gives spiritual sustenance and balance to a person' and guides him in the right direction. A wonderful poem with a great moral.

Sense of service is missing in society. Selfish who build their political careers exploiting the innocent public are respected and encouraged. Values keep disappearing with time. A great poem with an epic thought provoking theme. Beautifully presented. Thank you.