Friday, October 17, 2014

Orphanage? Comments

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The yard was lively then
Feeble hands were shivering
Pale faces brisk and whisper
But the nervousness was in queue
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Valsa George 25 October 2014

The orphans always thirst for love! Though they may have a shelter, their minds are parched and they wait for the showers of love to cool their sweltering lives! You have nicely portrayed the emptiness of those who have no dear and near ones to love them!

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Khalida Bano Ali 21 October 2014

A nice thought- - - - - -Showers of love are needed more in the yard of poverty but its orphanage! ...10

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Amitava Sur 21 October 2014

A passionate poem describing the emptiness amongst the orphans which is so penetrative. We all must stand by them for which they are at no fault.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 18 October 2014

Orphanage- removal of guardianship umbrella..we must love them..lovely so nice a reminder

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 18 October 2014

Yes in arid land shower of love is needed to make it lively.......very nicely composed

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Gajanan Mishra 17 October 2014

drops the love for ever, thanks.

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