Monday, October 19, 2009

Orphanage Comments

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the name says it all orphan age
they are orphans from birth
until they reach that age
that is how they got the name orphanage.
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 December 2009

have you ever thought of the aches and pains that they have gone through. unlike me or you. less said is beeter as they are experiencing and suffering our curse on them..sonicely put....10 read mine child.......good wishes

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Christine Kerr 14 November 2009

It's sad to see the bad seed take over so quick on some young ones in life. I don't understand when you may try to reach out to some of the misfortioned ones and still get bit in the a..

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Kranthi Pothineni 21 October 2009

Many feel the same way but very few takes a step or at least a small one make to change. Nice theme well expressed.

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Shashendra Amalshan 21 October 2009

I just loved the note in which you end the poem.This is a delicate matter which should be handled with great care..I wish and pray that a day will come where every one can have their own lovely kindergarten.. Nice..10+++ regards Shan

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 19 October 2009

a heartfelt write on a very touching subject...why are they becoming houses of horror..no one to question...a great piece

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