Orison (Give Me Your Smile) Comments

Past has gone, future is untold, hence present is better than those. We must have smiles instead of sadness. We must hope for better future. Perfect works of present will lead us to bright future. Fantastic expression has been made on time and life journey. I quote....... The past has gone The future still untold ......... .......... .......... ............ ......... ..... The hope always exist for whom believe it The dark is forever if we deny the present of the light Nice work.

A lovely and compelling piece, Soul- with the alluring promise of more. We look forward to those works!

Wow! man! this is a masterpiece, , its a very fine piece of art, a beautiful painting indeed.it got everything Soul...there's an artist, i am not sure who it was between HENRY MATISE and VAN GHORGH, who painted that painting called THE WINDOW...looking at the pic you can just say jah, he just painted what you can outside the window, but the meaning is deep, beyond the trees and flowers you see on the pic, , 'the past has gone, the future still untold we need the light to move on'

Yup! Past is past, future is uncertain or certainly unpredictable. So we are left with single choice live in the present world. It is upto us whether we glorify or life or cut a sorry face 24/7. 'The past has gone The future still untold We need the light to move on Stay in sadness or seek for happiness' As matter of fact, It was my privilege to read these lines which have behemoth effect on my life that is me in every life. A UNIVERSAL THEME runs all the poems. Good narrative technique employed by the poetess. Lo! Unwritten Soul A big thumbs up to you!

As a matter of fact, a true and pure sense of humanity and solidarity refinement...nice work

An insightful wisdom you had presented here poetically, and a nice metaphor too, well crafted thoughts.

i am always amazed with how you write....full of brilliant images.....you are like a high standard camera that can capture everything you see...ten for this one....

Lovely thoughts, lovely feelings your words are spreading! You give us the choise and the chance of hope. Yes we can change the world through the spread of goodness and smiles! That is the direction I would choose if you would make me a captain. Wish I could change the rebellious ones in world's lovers, lol. Lovely poem, thank you for share,10

The poem runs into past, present and future so spontaneously and make us feel that life is great in spite of sweet as well as sour experiences.Confidence and hope always guide us to take up life spiritedly.The contrast between Black and white is beautifully pictured! vocabulary, imagery and tone of the poem is superb.Wonderful piece of work. Marks 10+

You painted a brilliant picture of hope. It ain't over till the fat lady sinks. Mind the pun... :)

So lovely, as always. You've never disappointed me with your work. I'm sure RFTA will be a spectacular project. I look forward to seeing more of it.

this is a great write with soul and hope for the live we wish to have, the heart comes through really strongly keep it up please as you can write good poems

strong with hope, and a hunger for the wonder of life!

As someone said in his comment: you are a bright soul in a dark shadow you're so bright continue to share more poems: °)

I love this lil bro..i will always have a smilw for you as you are a bright soul in a dark shadow...always brightening my day..and u r an extremely skillful and enjoyable writer. Big sis xo

What a wonderfully expressed 'piece' 'US! ! I will patiently await the others by which I know will be 'hits' as well. Keep doing your thing'. I give this one a 10' as well. Thanks for sharing.

It's an amazing poem, soul, , , You opened the casement of hope here, wherefrom I can now see this world but future is still untold but I can live here with the hope of present..here hope is like a boost and a boon. And the light of our breath is still burning here even if we are in a dilemma.. And blessing me this light of hope to live.. Hope thrust us to sail in this ebb and flow of life.. This poem is still such a tool to hope for the best things of life.. You written so well soul... Top marks for you..

Wow, soul, this poem is great. A great wisdom wonderfully expressed. The eternal dualism of things on earth But the light is never far away. Keep your great light burning brightly. I really look forward to your new poems.

Its looking good my friend. Deny the present of the light, I love that line. A great start to Your new poems.