Origins In A Name Comments

I really like this. I especially like the second verse. To have their creator's blessing than destroy the cells which contain past lessons. Very good.

trying to reclaim honor/in this name I claim ownership---these two lines are catch lines of this wonderful poem. The urge within will show you the way!

i LOVE THIS POEM IT SPEAKS TO THE NAME IN WHICH WE ORIGINATE FRM

Last name..yours is great. like mine, mine is Anderson, son of a man! you did a nice work again well done

Wonderful poem, our your last name is like a rope, a tiny rope tracing you to your very root, telling you a tale of your ancestors, their bravery, successes and short comings. Great poem by the way.

Beautiful write! Look what he is missing! ! ! ! You claim that honour all for you please!