Tuesday, May 29, 2018

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Trees walk out to sea,
Waters encircle them like floating barrels.
Tall mastheads with green sails cross the sun.
Thick lateral roots act as rudders.
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Salvatore Ala
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Jazib Kamalvi 30 May 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Salvatore. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Salvatore Ala 30 May 2018

Thank you. I will look for your poem Love and. Cheers!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 May 2018

Salvatore, another fine poem....10++++

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Salvatore Ala 30 May 2018

Thanks so much!

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Robert Murray Smith 29 May 2018

An imaginative write with good imagery well penned.++10.

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Salvatore Ala 30 May 2018

Thank you Robert! Cheers!

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