Saturday, February 11, 2017

Original State... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Original State...

Can you feel it?
the breeze,
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Annette Aitken
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Christopher Tye 13 February 2017

A sensible poem for a world going mad with hustle and bustle to a level where most human minds are being pushed to there limits of endurance.

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Susan Williams 11 February 2017

Now this is the kind of poem I like to read- -it makes you read carefully, listen to nuances, savor the words chosen to serve as messengers, and sit back and reflect upon what one has learned from this time spent with your thoughts. Stunning piece, Annette. 10+++++++++++++ and a place on my Favorite List

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Hans Vr 11 February 2017

Wow, Annette, this is good. This is so relevant in today's world filled with the madness of all the news. Sometimes we need a break, a time out to come back to our original state, to find back our own peace of mind. I liked the poem very much.

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