Original Soup Of Life Comments

I love this poem.thank you for this piece

"And what about a woman? Her way of sending a person spinning"

I used to be a biology major too!

"Behind the rigid fact there is a dance which is never confined to this moment."

Boy, this is one heck of a lot of information for me. Mind boggling.

This poem held me, the idea is brilliant! There are so many unanswered questions in life.

Too inspiring...as Susan puts it this poem should be given multiple visits to enjoy...this poem teaches many things to me...amazing write...thank you

Thank you for sharing this.

After a long days.....

This poem is powerful

A wonderful write about the miracle of just being in the living cosmic ocean.

Cont/. Thus God the creator of the well spring of life with clay and water, the one who cooked the figurative primordial soup, the one who planted the microbial mat the first form of life, the creator of the matrix that your clever complex poem talks of. Kudos for a scientist calibre poem.

A bright stellar awesome muse on coding and DNA, intellectual and eloquent questions indeed, the answers lead to the higher power who is the intelligent reader and writer of the DNA info and more, as author of the universe,

How Amino Acids were produced, and how matter started reproducing, a very difficult topic and man could not understand it yet completely. We the believers have a very easy reply that there is a God who did it. However the poet is a great philosopher, he thinks and has succeeded to explain the evolution of life up to a certain extent.

Not a science person so leaving the facts aside, there is an Intelligence that extends itself to everything and capable of replenishing itself according to the designs it creates and destroys.....and leaves us to wonder and wonder.....brilliant poem Denis, one that catches and keeps the the attention like a crossword puzzle!

No one knows why. This poem confirms life's complexity in all forms. It also confirms how unique we are from others. There will never be another like each individual. Intelligence is fluid and not definable. The mind with its electrical chemical nature changes in microseconds. It is never the same at any point of time. How could it be defined? I think the second half of the poem confuses the first. Two poems?

soup of life thrilling word from DNA measure up from the 6ft it mystic greet venturous pathos of melancholic........................................................................../// great 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

Dear danis Mair..very exquisite poem with minute details....thanks...///

I loved to read this wonderful eye-opener. So true, Denis, DNA is not intelligent. It is merely a code. The matrix, the wonderfully intelligent cosmos, the director of all processes, something our human mind may not be capable of understanding. Let us tune in, into that wonderful power of the universe, that versatile, endlessly creative and 'kind' Universe

TWO: The writer of this comment and compliment is not intelligent, but the one who reads this and understands the true perspectives....A 10++++++++++ for the voting/rating. Denis, you get the greetings from my genius bro in Jakarta, Indonesia.