Original As Day Comments

Articulate poem.

A good start with a nice poem, Brian Jani. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

this good poetry. Please check out my poems

You have talent and your own unique voice - you should upload more poetry.

A thought provoking poem.

Unreplicatable, unpredictable, unbiased: original as original as day NICE WORK MY FRIEND KEEP WRITING

Lovely piece of poetry, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and insightfully penned with conviction in poetic diction. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

good thought and write! Keep the pen flowing

Unreplicatable, unpredictable, unbiased: original as original as day Exactly. As original as this write. Well done my friend. All best.

Hi. I read your poem. Well, there's a famous saying Yesterday is history, tomorrow is mystery but today is a gift that is why it is called present. But I think today is also a history and even tomorrow will be a history for next generation. All in all I believe in carpe diem and live the moment my friend. Good Luck

Brian, each sentence is a complete thought that can stand on it's own, but put together to make this poem is truly amazing! ! I love it. Each sentence enlightens the entire poem. Thank you Brian, for all the wonderful comments you have written, I appreciated them more than you know. Thank you, RoseAnn

outstanding write i really like this poem short straight to the point

outstanding write i really like this poem short straight to the point

A very good and original bit of poetry, stimulating to the mind, and even moreso to the soul. Write on Brian, write on!

Original look at the day I would have liked more words of yours to finish the poem, you set the want to the reader with a great start...regards

Thanks for your comment on Each Day's a Diamond. I have re-read Original As Day and I think I understand it better this time, so perhaps I was just tired the first time round. Anyway I like it now.

very peculiar and probing to read

Both the poems you have posted have some striking imagery but I find them hard to understand. Perhaps you could make a few concessions to your readers by clarifying things a little more, though to judge by the glowing comments you have received I'm probably just a deficient reader...

There is only the NOW everything is happening at the present moment. NO yesterday or no tomorrow just NOW! Fascinating isn't it. I loved the poem, well woven, good imagery.

I think this piece is lovely.