Origin To Lost Comments

'New childlike looks Slowly grows up lights like the juvenile breast' - a beautiful expression! Loved the comment of Robert Murray Smith.

now a days i have noticed most of ur poems are breasted

A fascinating poem Mahtab!

Blooming existence of life! ! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

A beautifully evocative poem enjoyed thanks

Beautiful visual poetry very well executed and the journey of moon painted. Great many admirations. Moon Crescent On sky lap..... beautiful beginning. Losing its beauty From lap cradle To bareness Shade of Lost....and equally contrasting ending. Magnificent.