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i completely agree with Onelia, beautiful imagery and a philosophical conclusion. Rema, i rate this poem very high -brilliant. mamta

The poem is like a lovely tree - every line is a branch with its own ripe fruit or fresh leaves...

And change the only truth / Origin unbiased - a great truth of life indeed!

Deep, yet mellowed presentation. makes one read in a stretch. sathya narayana

beautiful, splendidly expressed

This poem is really great as it expresses the whole reality of a being who lives in this world and lives for the ultimate which is the survival.

Beautiful poem! ! ! ! Keep writing! !

Rain merges with river...river surrenders to ocean…ocean roars against rocks…despite danger lurking near, cattle continue to graze in forests…essential to survive…Good verbal images seen here… Sun shines without bias… change is truth…the only surviving truth perhaps… Very impressive…*10*