Friday, June 13, 2008

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Rating: 3.2

Alongside the hill
River flew calm
Calm from within
Rain drops smidgen
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Rema Prasanaa
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Mamta Agarwal 10 July 2008

i completely agree with Onelia, beautiful imagery and a philosophical conclusion. Rema, i rate this poem very high -brilliant. mamta

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Onelia Avelar 04 July 2008

The poem is like a lovely tree - every line is a branch with its own ripe fruit or fresh leaves...

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Subbaraman N V 04 July 2008

And change the only truth / Origin unbiased - a great truth of life indeed!

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Sathyanarayana M V S 26 June 2008

Deep, yet mellowed presentation. makes one read in a stretch. sathya narayana

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Chitra - 25 June 2008

beautiful, splendidly expressed

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rohit sapra 20 June 2008

This poem is really great as it expresses the whole reality of a being who lives in this world and lives for the ultimate which is the survival.

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Ozzy Govea 19 June 2008

Beautiful poem! ! ! ! Keep writing! !

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Kesav Easwaran 14 June 2008

Rain merges with river...river surrenders to ocean…ocean roars against rocks…despite danger lurking near, cattle continue to graze in forests…essential to survive…Good verbal images seen here… Sun shines without bias… change is truth…the only surviving truth perhaps… Very impressive…*10*

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